Hey, James, sorry that no one commented on your last elevator pitch. Anyway, I can definitely see improvement since the first pitch. I think that was whole purpose of these assignments, to see we would be comfortable and improve. Your pitch wasn't bland, nor boring, very persuasive. It looked like you were using hand movement, which is good, but I couldn't see it because of the camera angle. Other than that, great job!
Dear James. Great work! I can see an improvement since your last pitch. You didn't waste any time, got straight to the point. You didn't have any ummm's or ahhh's. You moved around and were very animated. Over all you have some good public speaking skills. One thing I noticed you might wanna try for next time is picking a different camera angle. I wouldn't sweat it tho. I don't think the teacher expects top quality video production skills.
Hey James, great work on this post, I think that you have shown great improvement in all three of your videos. You were very fluent and had great body language throughout your video. I think you have a great idea here and I think you will see that a lot of people will be behind it. I would also consider changing the view of your camera, but overall, great work James and good luck on rest to come.
Hey what’s up James, great elevator pitch once again! I think you did a great job explaining what your overall pitch is about, and it is obvious you have a lot of passion for what you are trying to do. I think my one piece of advice would be that you could be a little more calculated and what you say. Basically, there are a lot of Umms, And in my opinion it takes away from the power of the pitch a little bit. Overall, I think it was a great pitch, and with more practice and repetition I think you could totally sell this to the University of Florida and come out with a great result.
Hey, James, sorry that no one commented on your last elevator pitch. Anyway, I can definitely see improvement since the first pitch. I think that was whole purpose of these assignments, to see we would be comfortable and improve. Your pitch wasn't bland, nor boring, very persuasive. It looked like you were using hand movement, which is good, but I couldn't see it because of the camera angle. Other than that, great job!
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ReplyDeleteDear James. Great work! I can see an improvement since your last pitch. You didn't waste any time, got straight to the point. You didn't have any ummm's or ahhh's. You moved around and were very animated. Over all you have some good public speaking skills. One thing I noticed you might wanna try for next time is picking a different camera angle. I wouldn't sweat it tho. I don't think the teacher expects top quality video production skills.
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ReplyDeletegreat work on this post, I think that you have shown great improvement in all three of your videos. You were very fluent and had great body language throughout your video. I think you have a great idea here and I think you will see that a lot of people will be behind it. I would also consider changing the view of your camera, but overall, great work James and good luck on rest to come.
Hey what’s up James, great elevator pitch once again! I think you did a great job explaining what your overall pitch is about, and it is obvious you have a lot of passion for what you are trying to do. I think my one piece of advice would be that you could be a little more calculated and what you say. Basically, there are a lot of Umms, And in my opinion it takes away from the power of the pitch a little bit. Overall, I think it was a great pitch, and with more practice and repetition I think you could totally sell this to the University of Florida and come out with a great result.
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